- a really effective concept overall - blackout / cut to black seems like it could have been missing media file although not sure if it's in on purpose? - Shots in the beginning are effective with crossing between establishing shots foreshadowing where the crime will take place - some interesting shots used (could have played around with shorter shots to get the tension and suspense really ramped up at the point of the handover) - The music at the end, ends quite abruptly and could have either faded down or cut at an ending point to go into the credits. - Credits need full cast and roles played even if they feature in title sequence - overall a much clearer portrayal of the thriller genre than PT 2 and progression in understanding the genre and replicating the genre is evident. Well done.
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ReplyDeleteOverall Score: 17/20
- a really effective concept overall
- blackout / cut to black seems like it could have been missing media file although not sure if it's in on purpose?
- Shots in the beginning are effective with crossing between establishing shots foreshadowing where the crime will take place
- some interesting shots used (could have played around with shorter shots to get the tension and suspense really ramped up at the point of the handover)
- The music at the end, ends quite abruptly and could have either faded down or cut at an ending point to go into the credits.
- Credits need full cast and roles played even if they feature in title sequence
- overall a much clearer portrayal of the thriller genre than PT 2 and progression in understanding the genre and replicating the genre is evident. Well done.