Overall score - 8/10 - 180' Rule (2) - Shot-reverse-shot (2) - Match on action (2) - Sequence & continuity (2) - Title (0) You have the beginnings of a great opening sequence. Your key is now going to be finding music to really fit with and enhance what's happening on screen.
Audio needs to be tweaked so the background sounds of the cicadas is either in everything or cut out completely. Have a play around with maybe lingering on shots in the beginning potentially for more effect? Try adding sound effects in for added suspense to highlight scary moments, potentially more of a 'moment' around the 'barber' getting the blade ready?
Hi Grace
ReplyDeleteOverall score - 8/10
- 180' Rule (2)
- Shot-reverse-shot (2)
- Match on action (2)
- Sequence & continuity (2)
- Title (0)
You have the beginnings of a great opening sequence. Your key is now going to be finding music to really fit with and enhance what's happening on screen.
Audio needs to be tweaked so the background sounds of the cicadas is either in everything or cut out completely. Have a play around with maybe lingering on shots in the beginning potentially for more effect? Try adding sound effects in for added suspense to highlight scary moments, potentially more of a 'moment' around the 'barber' getting the blade ready?